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YourBedSore · Tattoo lover Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 8

I got my first tattoo today, little did I know I was getting it in the most painful location (ribs). I think it was the worst pain I have been in, I guess I haven't been in much pain. It was more my design than his, and some little things bother me that i want to get fixed up. Let me know what you think.

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it curls around under my left breast.

do you see anything obviously wrong with it? I don't like how the gren curls on the tail come out of nowhere, I want him to connect them to the body beneath the red parts of the tail. Also, the golden curls on the wings, on one side there is a space between them and the body, on the other, there is no gap. Also, on the one side one of the curls goes underneath the body. In a way I think this kind of makes sense since that wing is curling underneath kind of and the other is expanded straight out, so it would make sense that the curls are pushed underneath and against the body, but the way it looked really upset me. What do you think, does that look fine and like how it should be, or should the golden curls be more symmetrical? [/img]

YourBedSore · Tattoo lover Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 8

I've photoshopped it a bit to see about getting some additional work done. What do you think?
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flagal · Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 9:00 am Post subject:

Personally, I like what you've added to it. One thing I would have done differently is to thin the stripes on the red so that they aren't so bold when compared to the dots on the yellow. I don't think that the yellow curls need to be symmetrical. However, I wasn't sure if there was only suppose to be two of the red coming from one side of the body when there are three on the other side. I also agree that adding that little bit of green makes more sense. If you've already had the additional work done, I'd like to see how it turned out. Thanks.

kat1990 · Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 8:54 am Post subject:

thats one unique tattoo, be proud of it:D

Deeside · Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 4:28 pm Post subject:

like it matey...different but like it loads

m.keith · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 4:05 pm Post subject:

Looks great to me...and a cool place on the body too. Congrats on the first.
Keith

Zoli_Angel · Tattoo lover Joined: 16 Nov 2007 Posts: 2

ooooooo, i LOVE it!!! its soooo unique Smile

thats the best kind i think. i didnt see the 2nd pic, only the 1st & i really loved it. the coloring is great too!!
have a great night!